Wednesday, November 19, 2008

PERAHU USIA


Pesimis waktu...
Menyulam senja-senja kehidupan
Tangkal hidup kubiar tegar
Buat pedoman di masa depan

Urat-urat pilus ini..
Kian hari kian mendebu..
Menyurut usia yang turut berlagu
Erti hidup pernah bersaksi
Apakah dikau capai kehendak dulu?

Paradoks sama sekali!
Sehujung zaman menikam diri..
Satu persatu menghilang pergi
Nikmat kurnia Illahi disalah erti
Membaham diri merosak kendiri

Kulihat burung kelicap itu..
Melayang lembut mengelus rentak bayu
Bebas mendabik debunga  
Terpaku..menyata sangsi personifikasi
Sedang unggas bebas mengerti hidup
Apakah manusia tiada sedar keunggulan sendiri?

Tabir usia kian melabuh
Mendesak sekulumit kudrat menjunam maksima
Hijrah kini bukan separa
Buangkan rasa gempita hasutan Iblis
Membentung gelojak jiwa membentuk emosi
Melanggar prasasti mencipta insani jadid

Perahu usia ini..
Mungkin merakusku laksana algojo duniawi
atau..
Mungkin menobatku laksana khalifah hakiki..
Penantianku penuh misteri

p/s=uh2..lame xtulis..warm up warm up..


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23 comments:

  1. wannabugisNovember 19, 2008 at 4:57 PM

    amboi2..
    puitisnyer..
    xpaham den..
    huhu..
    kabare?

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  2. AnonymousNovember 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM

    adakah anda menulis ini sewmpena besday anda?

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  3. TOXICSNAILNovember 20, 2008 at 8:20 AM

    erk
    kak wana..xdela bese2 je pn
    eh simple je tu
    cbe bce bbrp kli msti paham hehe

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  4. TOXICSNAILNovember 20, 2008 at 8:20 AM

    alhamdulillah di sni..
    best2
    sejuk lak tu
    heeh

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  5. TOXICSNAILNovember 20, 2008 at 8:20 AM

    lina
    dok aih
    aku nye besday lama agi..
    tulis sbb bosan2 kot
    hoho

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  6. AnonymousNovember 22, 2008 at 1:59 AM

    peh afiq....ayt...huhuh

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  7. uniqNovember 22, 2008 at 1:29 PM

    jehan..
    btoi ka ni ang buat sindrik?
    perggghhh..jiwang karat...=P

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  8. TOXICSNAILNovember 24, 2008 at 5:45 AM

    hai aisya
    lame xdgr cter?
    hai2

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  9. TOXICSNAILNovember 24, 2008 at 5:46 AM

    uniq
    dok ah..aku xjiwang la..ni alam maya je pn..bkn realiti..hoho

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  10. uniqNovember 25, 2008 at 11:33 AM

    ek eleh xjiwang konon..
    tgk ang pon tau kata jiwang..=P

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  11. AnonymousNovember 26, 2008 at 9:47 AM

    haha.lame jgk xdga cter.
    mau korek cter dr ngko.
    tp....ym ko bngong j en.
    haha

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  12. TOXICSNAILNovember 29, 2008 at 11:31 AM

    ya uniq
    apa?nmpk aku jiwang ka?adoi2
    hahah
    xdela bese2 je pn

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  13. TOXICSNAILNovember 29, 2008 at 11:32 AM

    aisya
    lol cmne nk jadi tah ym aku
    asik membengongkan dri2 je
    hehe

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  14. TOXICSNAILNovember 30, 2008 at 2:03 AM

    weyh...pssal pelk urat2 pilus...bukan dier kt cezh ke

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  15. AnonymousNovember 30, 2008 at 3:48 AM

    tahniah!
    syabas..
    sebuah karya yang mantop lg hebat dr enche jehan kita..
    serba boleh..
    ish..
    sape yg rasa berminat dgn penulis ni..
    boleh lah menghubungi beliau dgn segera..
    ngahaha

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  16. TOXICSNAILNovember 30, 2008 at 7:35 AM

    jual aku ke ayam...ish2

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  17. AnonymousNovember 30, 2008 at 12:08 PM

    bukan jual..promote.huahahaha

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  18. han!December 6, 2008 at 2:05 PM

    hoho.
    anak didik hazeeq ke?
    mantap ah!

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  19. chepazanaDecember 10, 2008 at 1:11 AM

    puhuhuhu...masih puitis seperti biasa....selepas nieyh dijamin krya ko ade unsur2 budaya luar.....

    hehehehehehehe

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  20. PiseyDecember 16, 2008 at 11:02 AM

    haha.bez gak.huu^^
    hebat ko

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  21. TOXICSNAILJanuary 1, 2009 at 11:52 AM

    hani
    hahha mepek la dikau hani.dikau bgimana plak?

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  22. TOXICSNAILJanuary 1, 2009 at 11:53 AM

    chepa
    amboi..aku ttp anak malaysia kot

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  23. TOXICSNAILJanuary 1, 2009 at 11:53 AM

    pisey
    erk??tah..no komen..hehe

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